Monday, 27 February 2017

However Yellow Gingerly Discovered Remarkable by Emily

This afternoon (well late this afternoon) I discovered a remarkable fossil. However it was in my neighbour's back garden and it was too over grown. I always climbed of the fence to sit under the yellow holly tree that’s where I got my best thoughts. So one morning, before anyone was awake I climbed out of my window. I gingerly climbed through the fence. I carefully made my way to the back of the garden it was beautiful it was like a secret garden but there was a chair and someone was lying on that chair and the fossil had gone…

1 comment:

  1. Hi Emily,
    Your writing is very good. Next time you could maybe add more description and some feelings. Keep up the good writing!