This afternoon (well late this afternoon) I discovered a remarkable fossil. However it was in my neighbour's back garden and it was too over grown. I always climbed of the fence to sit under the yellow holly tree that’s where I got my best thoughts. So one morning, before anyone was awake I climbed out of my window. I gingerly climbed through the fence. I carefully made my way to the back of the garden it was beautiful it was like a secret garden but there was a chair and someone was lying on that chair and the fossil had gone…
Hi Emily,
ReplyDeleteYour writing is very good. Next time you could maybe add more description and some feelings. Keep up the good writing!