Professor Smith had a plan to steal his arch nemesis's invention, but it was going to be difficult he had to go outside for the first time in his life. George Smith was born on the 6th of December 1975 but doctors always looked at him in a weird way because he had a disease in his brain where if he got caught in the sunlight he would become twisted in the head and his face would go purple. So, he went in the night, but on the way, he ran into a herd of crocodiles and he was trapped.
Hi Samuel,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your piece of writing. I found it interesting that your character, George, had never been outside in his life due to a strange illness. You left me wondering how he'll escape from his current predicament!
Keep up the good work.
Mr.P
Team 100 WC
Bury, UK
Thank You very much for your lovely comment
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