The crocodile glared at Professor Purple. How dare he keep him locked in a cage, day and night, night and day? The twisted man looked at the crocodile thrashing about, in his barely big enough cage. It had iron bars all around it and a padlock that was as difficult to open as a door with no handle.
Professor Purple terminated his call to Chester Zoo. “Why won’t anyone take this poor animal?”
Visits to the veterinarian showed Snappy (the crocodile) had a brain tumour. The professor had one last hope: Edinburgh Zoo. “Yes, we’ll take him!” the zoo replied…
Clara this is a great interpretation including the words for the 100 Word Challenge this week. I really like the way that you have included some dialogue because that certainly adds interest and power to your writing when it is done well. Ms M, teacher from Ashley School near Rangiora.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ms M, for your lovely comment.
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