“Mum,
I've lost Mr. Tickles, I had him we went to the shop earlier,” cried Diana as
she sadly sat down on her mum's sofa. She loved Mr. Tickles, she had had him
since she was a tiny baby.
“I'm
sure that we will find him,” her Mum said sweetly. “I know let's go and retrace
our steps I'm sure we will find him,” her mum mumbled.
“Look,
that boy has him,” Diana's Mum said, “let's go and ask for it.”
“Actually,
he looks really happy - he can have Mr. Tickles,” Diana sweetly said whilst
smiling at the young boy.
This is a very interesting piece of writing, I liked the twist at the end where the boy was allowed to keep the teddy. Not only have you answered the questions well, but you have also used speech and adjectives.
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