Saturday 6 December 2014

The Ship by Grace LB

The rusty old boat has landed onto a sea full of rocks and looks like it was beached there decades ago. It has big holes in and the rust is spreading on the inside and outside of the Titanic looking old boat. It looks like it once sailed for far distances and got too close to the shore and there was never a person or a device to move the big boat and was left there as the tide went out. I think the glass was removed ages ago and people escaped before the ship not knowing that it was going to last for years.       

1 comment:

  1. Grace, your literal description of the boat helps the reader "see" the picture without seeing the picture! Great word choices from beginning to end. Well done!

    Mrs. Peterson (Team 100wc)
    Texas, USA

    ReplyDelete