This is a ship that hundreds of years ago crashed onto the rocks because the waves were really big. Because the waves were so bad when the ship crashed and it all broke into pieces all the people that were on that ship fell of it and drowned and died in the water and no one saw them again. So now it is on the rocks rusting away and people have still got that memory when their mum told them that story. Some people come all the way from different countries just to see that ship, and to take photographs.
Hello Olivia and thank you for entering the 100 WC this week. I really like how your writing explains how the ship came to be there. Yours is the first challenge I've read this week which has done that. You've used some good words which add to your description and make it easier for the reader to imagine a picture of the scene in their head. For next time, I would say make sure you have a last read through and correct any little mistakes you may have made. Well done!
ReplyDeleteMrs Davis, Team 100, Cambridgeshire, UK