''Hello my big friend," said Lego.
''Hello to you too," said the bird whilst pecking at some food.
''How are you today then?'' asked Lego.
''Fine thank you!''
They carried on talking about general stuff and they had some lunch together and carried on talking. At the end of the day Lego and the bird went home. Lego had some dinner it was her favourite: Steak pie with peas and roast potatoes, ''Yum!'' Lego said with her mouth full of food. The bird had some dinner it was the standard bird food, seeds and that was their day.
Hi Morgan,
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I enjoyed reading your story. You've explained the photo prompt well. I like your use of dialogue. Well done.
To improve your writing you might try looking at different ways of starting a sentence. For example try using an "ING" clause....Carrying on talking, they had some lunch together...
Keep up the good work!
I look forward to reading more adventures from you.
Mrs Boyce @ Team 100 WC
Cork, Ireland
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You have used a lot of speech in this text which is what I do with some of my stories. I think speech can really tell you the feelings of characters and their personalities. Well done.
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