The land of clowns.
My name is Crimson nice to meet you,
Don't know me?
Well you will do soon!
I once went up to this grave,
And it said,
'If you can read this send a wave.'
I did it,
and next I knew,
I was in a room with the fireplace lit.
It was misty,
I frantically shouted, "HELP!"
Someone said, "Hello, did you miss me?"
I screamed,
I yelled,
And the person they leaned.
They said "Hello, welcome to Playland,
This is also known as, 'Land of the Clowns'.
He took my hand,
And sent me there without care.
Thank you for this unusual piece of writing Millie. I had to read it several times as I thought about the style and the way it was laid out -- poetical style i.e. starting sentences with And.
ReplyDeleteYou open with a strong and engaging 'voice' which continues to describe a bizarre series of experiences.
You clearly have a lot of imagination.
Many Thanks
Debbie team100wx