"Keep running, my friend!" Lucy desperately shouted at me from behind. I turned round to see the beast catching up. Its wriggling tongue reached out and tried to grab me before I escaped but the creature was too slow. "Yes!" I whispered to myself in triumph. Then, I turned around to notice Lucy wasn't beside me.
I looked up into the cold starry night, expecting her to fall from the sky. I sighed. What if she's gone forever? I thought. I was just about to lose all hope when a black hole appeared. It was a gateway to another dimension!
Hi. I enjoyed reading your short story and thought you did a great job of engaging the reader, well done!
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