Me and my best friend
Ella were running into a gateway and we saw a black dog. It was a cold day and
we were worried about the poor lonely dog. One hour later we returned, and he
was still there, no one had bothered to look at him or try to help him. He was
still stuck in the same bush and he didn't move, he was scared you could tell
by the sad look in his eyes. He was barking and did not realise that we were
there to help him. We then tried to get him out.
Leah you did a reaaly good job describing the dog and its plight. I felt sad for the dog, and happy that the two kids wanted to help. This was a very believable story. Great job!
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