I was just lingering around looking at the school
gateway waiting for my friend, when I saw a glimpse of something black in the school forest. I went over to have a
look, and pulled my coat around me tighter, as it was cold
in the shade of the trees. I saw that the figure was a man all dressed in
black, and he started running through the
KS1 playground, out the gates, and into an awaiting vehicle. We were all very
confused and alarmed at this, and some of us thought it was a setup, done by Mr
Wilkinson. Then the police turned up.
Hi Tilly - what a terrible situation you've described in your writing for this week's 100WC. I can see that you've thought really carefully about which words to use for the best effect. Well done :-)
ReplyDeleteSu Harris (Team 100WC Suffolk, UK)