Saturday 16 March 2019
…empty. What a surprise!…, Anissa
On a miserable, cold day, a girl called Faith was playing outside in her garden. A friend called Lilly came over to play with her. They decided to play in Faith’s sandpit, but it looked different - really empty. What a surprise! All of her family came over and shouted, “Surprise!” She felt so surprised and really happy. Her family hid the toys on purpose just to make her feel different. They made a surprise into a party with all her family and some friends. The cake, which they were eating, tasted really delicious and creamy. This was an amazing day.
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What a lovely turnaround for a glum day Anissa. How do *you* feel about surprise parties? I've never had one so I'm not sure how I'd react.
ReplyDeleteThanks for naming your characters; I always feel that gives the story more depth. I wonder if you could have described the 'delicious' birthday cake and how it was decorated - imagine Great British Bake-off, but on radio.
Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.