Saturday, 28 October 2017

As the door slammed by Daisy

“Hooray” it was finally here. I’d been waiting to stay at my aunt’s house in the country for weeks. “You do know that her house is haunted don’t you” said my sister grinning. She was always winding me up. We got out of the car after what seemed miles down a leafy lane. I grabbed my bag and headed for the bedroom at the back of the house. It wasn’t haunted, I thought but it did feel cold as the wind rattled the window. I looked up and saw a shadow on the wall then as the door slammed, I knew she could be right!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Daisy - I enjoyed your piece of writing. Good choice of adjectives and verbs to set the scene. I wonder what happens next ...

    Sherry (Team 100)
    London, England