Today I woke up to a brand new day and turned on my TV, I was watching my favourite YouTube channel when my sister and her friend came into my room, as my sister's friend had stayed the night we all decided to play hide and seek I had a really good spot which was in my bedroom and then the seeker was on the loose looking for me and my sister, my sister wasn’t paying attention and shut the door hard and as the door slammed I knew the seeker would find us both, so I told my sister to hide somewhere else whichshe did as the seeker was opening the door she got caught and I was the victor for that game.
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