Today me and my parents went to Mr Philadelphia’s Animal Show. There is always a category, like for example, last week it was a talent show and me and my mum watched it. Today it is a dress-up show, I’m dressing up Pringle (my dog) as a doctor. Once it was the same category as this week and we saw who won. His name was Sam and his dog was dressed up as a magician, and the dog was wearing glasses!
Its time, my mum and dad sat in the audience screaming, '' You go girl!''
Everyone stared at me, '' What?''
Hi Darcie,
ReplyDeleteGreat story! Excellent spelling and grammar throughout. Your story was very well structured. It also contained lots of great ideas, I especially like the name Pringle for a dog. Just one small thing: "its" should have an apostrophe. Other than that it was perfect.
Michael (Team 100wc), Warwick, UK.