Saturday 8 September 2018

...but what colour should it be? by Eleanor

It was a Friday, and I was looking forward to my first spy mission, so after the sun had gone down I set off to headquarters.  I was on the way to the case. I had to be fast as it was a serious crime. A bomb had been planted and we needed to defuse it before it exploded!  I worked at the bomb while everyone escaped. TIC, TIC, TIC. I needed to be quick. TIC, TIC, TIC. All I needed to do was cut the wire but what colour should it be?  I cut blue... BOOM! Oops, wrong wire!  

1 comment:

  1. A very clever story, Eleanor. It is always great to read a 100 word piece where something climactic happens - makes it so much more interesting!
    Keep up the good work.
    Julie

    ReplyDelete