Saturday 9 March 2019

RED LADDER SINKING COINS PAVEMENT by Tom


Me and my best friend, Bob, were walking down Red Street when we found a ladder that led down to the sewer. Bob decided that it was a good idea to go down and have a look. That was the last terrible idea he ever had. I refused to go down there so he called me a chicken. I just rolled my eyes and sat down on the pavement. "Hey, there's lots of coins down here!" He exclaimed excitedly. But, as soon as he stepped down on the ground, he began sinking, until he completely disappeared. It was so scary!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tom,
    I really enjoyed your story this week. I think the sentence 'that was the last terrible idea he ever had' is excellent. It is forboding and made me want to read on. Your writing is very descriptive, I love the eye rolling!! Great work this week, well done.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin
    Ireland

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