Saturday, 12 March 2016

Statues by Paris

I was strolling down a thin path when all of a sudden I found three statues and I stared at them with amazement. I thought that they looked very old fashioned because they were not in any colour only dark black. One of the models didn’t have shoes on it just looked weird, very weird. I loved it, it was fabulous I really wanted to touch the man’s hat but I was just a little too small. I tried to pretend that I was one of the statues but I could not blend in because I was not dark grey.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Paris, we really like your use of descriptions and the fact that you keep all of your tenses the same. Siew-Kung likes your curiosity and that you wanted to touch one of the statues. I think we'd all feel the same : )
    Well done!
    Y6 at SISKY (Thailand)