Saturday 25 November 2017

The statue by Daisy

Jake walked to his Nan's. She lived at the back of a large forest but every time Jake walked past this tree it felt very cold and he always thought he saw a dark hooded man. When he arrived at his Nan's, he asked her why it was so cold in the woods. She told him there was a story that there was an old man’s dog who had died next to a tree there. Only he was to visit his grave, so he sent a cloaked man over there to guard the grave. “But I don’t think it is true!” she said.   

1 comment:

  1. Hey Daisy!

    I like your combination of the characters - your Nan, yourself, the dog and the hooded man. Remember short sentences add to the tension!

    Keep writing!

    Steven Hales - Stiffkey, Norfolk, England - #Team100wc

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