Saturday, 1 December 2018

We seemed to be on the television by Aaliyah

When I went Christmas shopping with my aunt we saw the news crew, we thought they were showing the car crash and continued with our shopping. We got carried away and ended up going to Primark and spending all of our Christmas shopping money so we went home to get more. My Nana clicked on the 1 O'clock news and it said something about local shoppers, we looked and saw we seemed to be on the television, our mouths dropped open as the news changed we agreed that we will go Christmas shopping next week. The next day, at school everyone was congratulating me for being the news.

1 comment:

  1. This is a great use of the prompt Aaliyah.
    Do you think 'we looked and saw ...' and 'our mouths dropped open ...'could have been new sentences? I think the moment would have more impact if you had done that don't you?

    Thanks for sharing,
    Jackie (Team 100 WC)
    New Zealand