When
I went Christmas shopping with my aunt we saw the news crew, we thought they
were showing the car crash and continued with our shopping. We got carried away
and ended up going to Primark and spending all of our Christmas shopping money
so we went home to get more. My Nana clicked on the 1 O'clock news and it said
something about local shoppers, we looked and saw we seemed to be on the
television, our mouths dropped open as the news changed we agreed that we will
go Christmas shopping next week. The next day, at school everyone was
congratulating me for being the news.
This is a great use of the prompt Aaliyah.
ReplyDeleteDo you think 'we looked and saw ...' and 'our mouths dropped open ...'could have been new sentences? I think the moment would have more impact if you had done that don't you?
Thanks for sharing,
Jackie (Team 100 WC)
New Zealand