Saturday, 1 December 2018

… we seemed to be on the television… by Oliver

At my school, we were doing a race between the fastest year six 80m sprinters. I thought my friend would win but I entered anyway. There were about 10 fast racers all lined up waiting to go, each one was very eager to win.  The race was about to start; on you marks, get set, go! It ended up with me winning and my friend, who I thought was going to win, coming second. I looked around and noticed a film crew at the race, I was amazed ...we seemed to be on the television... wow!  We might be famous.       

1 comment:

  1. Hi Oliver,
    Great concept of using a school race for your story. You incorporated the prompt seamlessly and your story flows well. I love that you also won the race in your story, despite not expecting to do so.
    Well done!
    Melbourne, Australia