The
sun began to shine above the horizon, a golden glaze arising from the bottom of
nowhere. He woke up, stretching, yawning and opening his eyes widely. The boy
wandered to his curtains - a bit like a zombie - and opened them as fast as
lightning... the light blinded him. It was like he just got a black eye. He
grabbed hold of his face and fell back onto his bed, suddenly, “Aaaaarrrggghhhhhh!”
the boy screamed as loud as he could. The hand slowly came off his face and he
went to his mirror; nothing more happened...
Well done Madi for a story that makes you want to read more. Nothing more happened could mean he didn't even see a reflection, or that it was just an ordinary morning, just a bit bright. Which was it? Good word choice, Madi.
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