Saturday, 16 May 2015

Rio - 100WC#32

Rebeca Red Head was going on an expedition with her mates when she saw something and she went to look what it what it was. Rebeca Red Head left the path and her mates and got lost so she tried to find her way back but she couldn’t and she encountered a big black bird. She found out it was a friendly bird so she got on it and flew up into the sky so she could look for her friends or to get home, she couldn’t see her mates so she flew home and had a really big nap.

Aron - 100WC#32


"Finally morning!" I said falling and thumping the ground with a thud. I heard my mother calling in for breakfast. I looked in the mirror and stared for a while. I saw a ripple wave through the mirror, and then another one! I stood firmly. I felt a sudden breeze... I yelled loudly whilst getting pulled into the mirror... 

I woke a while later to see that I was lying on a log in a strange position. I felt small as right next to me stood an enormous bird... 

Suddenly I realised I was one of the Lego people!

Chloe - 100WC#32

It was a beautiful morning in Skeggy and all was bright. ‘Knock knock’ went the grand straw knocker at the farm. Meg opened the old wooden door and standing right outside was a little boy dressed in old, smart clothes, “Well then?” 
The kid cheered, “Will you buy soma dees magic golden seeds from me for only one pound?” the kid was desperate so Meg decided to give him a chance and gave him two pounds. Meg fed the chickens with seeds including the golden one into the chicken pen. PECK PECK… WOW the little chicken was massive!!!

Caitlin - 100WC#32

There was a lady who lived in enchanted forest, nobody believed in her or liked her. But she wanted to prove them all wrong. So the following morning she crept out of the enchanted forest in to the open world. When she reached the park there was strange giant towering above her. When she had arrived at a tree stump she tripped over some bird feed and when she looked up she saw a dark black crow leaning towards her. It flew and pushed her. What was it going to do next? And where was the bird going to take her? 

Sunday, 10 May 2015

100WC#31 Adapting Fairytales

The challenge this week was due to adapt a fairytale to celebrate the birth of the new royal baby.

Snowflake and the 7 trolls by Jessica 
Once upon a time there lived a princess called Snowflake and she lived with 7 Trolls in the side of mountain. While Snowflake was living with the 7 Trolls her mother (The Queen) was on a hunt to kill her. It was very hard for Snowflake to keep running away from her horrible mother. The worst thing about Snowflake’s mother was that her mother was a witch so it was ten times harder to stay alive and survive. Every time Snowflake wanted to get away from the mountain the Trolls had to stay by her side.

Rapunzel by Sam B
Rapunzel was taking a stroll in the woods like she always did on a normal Sunday. She went past a tree and found a tall tower that stood in a massive steep crater. 
"Help! Help! I am stuck," shouted a voice from below. Rapunzel quickly sped towards a steep edge. 
"Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair," begged a knight at the bottom of the stone castle.
"How do you know my name?" asked Rapunzel. The knight did not say a thing. Rapunzel let down her hair and the lost knight climbed up her long hair up to the top.

Cinderella by Mollie 
Once upon a time when I was just a little child, a new royal family member arrived. Her name was Ella. When Ella was just four years old her mother died. After that an evil woman married her father. She had two daughters. They had taken Ella's room and so she had to sleep by the fire in the attic. The evil step mother used Ella as a slave. The two step sisters made fun of the ashes in her hair and called her Cinderella. Later on the family went out for a slow walk. The step-family got lost in the forest and were never seen again and Cinderella lived happily ever after.

Rapunzel by Morgan
Once lived a young girl named Rapunzel she was born with long brown hair a woman named Mother Gothal adopted the child but all she really wanted was her hair because Rapunzel's hair was magical. It healed the hurt and made Mother Gothal look and act younger. Rapunzel found out what was going on so she ran away and chopped all her hair off and turned blonde. A man named Flynn Rider came along and loved Rapunzel the moment he saw her and she loved him they both fell in love and got married Rapunzel's mother never knew what happened!

Hansel and Gretel Sam F
Once upon a time there was a small cottage. Inside there was a Mum, Dad and two little boys. One day we realised that we did not have enough food for our family. So the father brought his two boys into the forest and left them behind. When it started to get dark the boys had nowhere to go. Suddenly they saw a massive gingerbread house. So they ran as fast as they could to the door so they could go inside. As they knocked on the door a kind lady said, "You can stay here as long as you want."
The end.

Beauty and the Beast by Eleanor
Once upon a time there lived a very beautiful princess in a shining castle. The princess was so naughty she slurped her drinks; she even jumped on the table at dinner and she broke wind. 
One night an old man came to the castle. He wanted warmth from the rain and horrible weather. The princess took one look at the man and walked away slamming the castle door behind her. In one second the old man changed himself into a handsome prince. After that the prince transformed her into a hideous beast and put a powerful spell on the entire castle.



Sleeping Beauty by Madison
One day a baby princess was born and every one came to see her and nearly everyone was invited. Then there were some fairies called Sparkle, Glitter and Shine they all gave the baby Victoria a very nice present. Then an evil human sized fairy named Dark Widow swooped in and said, "Oh why was I not invited!" and she got angry and cursed baby Victoria so that when she was 18 she would fall on a bush of thorns and go to sleep for millions of years and only true love’s kiss could save her....................

Cinderella / Royalella by Jemima 
Long ago, there lived a young girl named Royella. Her mum had died years ago, that meant she'd never get a sister. So instead she decided to try and have a baby. Soon, she became pregnant. Everything was going according to plan when all of a sudden her father got married to Claireaphene, a very evil lady. Royalella's father wasn't aware that she was evil, but Royalella was. Royalella's new stepmother told her she wasn't allowed to have a baby. A while after, Royalella met the man of her dreams. They moved to Candy-land together. Royalella soon had her baby, it was named Charlotte.

Red Riding Hood by Rose 
My favourite fairy tale story is Little Red Riding Hood because it is fun to read. 
Once upon a time Little Red Riding Hood, Millie, went to bring her brother some ham and mustard because he had run out of food. As she was outside of his bedroom she saw a rat who jumped onto her shoulder. The rat was named Cow, he was Millie's brothers pet. When Millie skipped into her brother’s room she put down the food on his bedside table and popped Cow back into his cage. But she hadn't shut the bars properly, so Cow hopped out of the cage and into the wardrobe where he made a den. He did a little poo in Millie's brother’s best clothes. Millie had to sell Cow because he did a poo everywhere.

Red Riding Hood by Grace LB
There was a little girl called Red Riding Hood and she was on her way to see her granny, she walked there every week and her mother always warned her about the big bad bunny, he would steal your goodies and Red was giving granny cupcakes, but she didn't believe her. On her way she thought to herself, “How could a bunny be so scary.” She suddenly heard something behind her and then she only had one cupcake. Then she ran to her granny's house and gave her the cupcake, but all the bunny wanted was her carrot cupcakes.  

Goldilocks and the Three Bears by Charlie
There was once three royal family members. Prince William was big bear, Princes Kate was Mummy bear and Prince George was baby bear. One day they walked to the Castle in Kensington Forest where they were served with three bowls of Rice Krispies, they poured over the cold milk and listened as they went’ "SNAP", "CRACKLE" and an "ENORMOUS POP", when out jumped a little princess called Charlotte Elizabeth. The princess soon became part of the Royal family and couldn't wait to see her granny, the "Queen". Princess Charlotte was welcomed by the Queen into the arms of the Royal Family.

Goldilocks and the Three Monkeys by Harvey
Once upon time in the rain forest a girl called Goldilocks saw a treetop house so she climbed up and saw three wooden plates with bananas on them. Daddy’s banana was too ripe, Mummy’s wasn’t ripe enough and baby’s was just right. There were chairs made out of branches, Daddy’s was too rough, Mummy’s too thin and baby’s was just right. Then she saw three hammocks’, Daddy’s was too itchy Mummy’s was too scratchy and Baby’s was just right. The monkeys arrived back to find her sleeping and swung her out of the hammock she awoke and Goldilocks ran away.

Cinderella by Chloe
One day there lived two ugly sisters, a step mother and Ella Cinders. They were rich and loved their life except from Ella. She hated life and always moaned about it, well she didn’t exactly moan, she wrote about it in her wish diary. It had sixteen wishes ready for her birthday (tomorrow). She was excited and was ready to roll, but unfortunately for her she couldn’t have a party because her step mother and two sisters wouldn’t let her. She got angry about this and she stole money off her sisters to buy the beautiful dress. 
“ELLA, WHERE’S MY MONEY!!!”…

Gingerbread man by Aron
Once upon a time, lived an old man called Pat. He was lonely because his only daughter moved far away. Pat loved to bake. One day, he used a magical powder he got from his daughter. She said to use it when he feels lonely. He decided to make a big gingerbread man. After putting him in the oven it started to shatter! A massive blasting beam of blinding light came out from the old oven... The gingerbread man was alive! Pat didn't have to be alone anymore, he had a great companion and he called him Gingi.
And they lived happily ever after...

Cinderella by Caitlin 
There was a girl called Cinderella who was invited to a ball with her two ugly step sisters. When they arrived the prince was there. Cinderella danced with the prince until the clock struck 12, Cinderella ran out of the palace, leaving her shoe behind. The next morning the prince went to see whose foot it should fit. One of the ugly sisters heard of this and had an old witch cast a spell on her that any shoe she tried would fit. The shoe fit and on the day she married the prince he turned into a penniless pauper.

Caitlin - 100WC#30

As I gazed out of the kitchen window I had a feeling that this was going to be an exciting day, as I crunched on a cornflake. “Are you sure you are ready for your first day at the zoo?” asked mum cautiously. 
“Yes I am sure,” I replied confidently. I grabbed my bag off the table and left. 
As I started to walk down the street I glanced into a window to see a class as they danced. As I arrived at the zoo, it wasn't the hum drum of a normal day. The lion seemed to stare when I realised the cage door was open!

Saturday, 9 May 2015

Aron - 100WC#30

In the south part of the Africa lived a friendly lion Stan. Every morning Stan ate his healthy breakfast and brushed his teeth. Even though, Stan found it very exciting when brushing his teeth, one morning he found it hard to brush as one stubborn cornflake got stuck in between his teeth. Stan got very frustrated and asked his friend monkey to help him with his problem. Monkey was busy playing her drum however she agreed to help. She used dry straw of grass to clean in between lion's teeth and managed to take the cornflake out. Stan danced with happiness.

Chloe - 100WC#30

“MINE!" squealed little lion in anger as monkey snatched his cornflake drum off him. "IT’S MI-INE!” screeched monkey as little lion grabbed the toy and ran off into the Exciting Forest where the Tootlers danced and the Suckers squawked. “Oh no, because me and little lion were fighting he has gone into the dangerous Exciting Forest!” monkey knew that his friend was in danger and needed to go and save him. But what could he do? He had no idea, all he knew was that his friend was in danger and was his fault… 

Harvey - 100WC#30

As we sat on the grassy area eating our lunch, I was able to watch the lion wonder around its enclosure it looked so peaceful and calm, I couldn’t believe I was so close to such an amazing powerful animal.
Just as I began to eat my cornflake cake a loud drum roll started and music started to play. We all turned to where the sound was coming from It was the chimp enclosure they one by one they came out side all dressed up and danced to the music it was hilarious and exciting to see. I love zoos.

Charlie - 100WC#30

Yesterday while I was eating cornflakes for breakfast I was very excited, because we were going to have a great day. We went to see Madagascar at the cinema it was very exciting and funny. There were lots of animals in the film there was a zebra called Marty, the giraffe was called Melman, the hippo was called Gloria and the lion was called Alex. The best part of the film was when the animals danced to the beat of the drum. Then out came the penguins of Madagascar: Skipper, Kowalski, Rico and Private, whilst singing, "You like to move it," with King Julian the raccoon!

Grace LB - 100WC#30

Today we were going to the zoo and I was so excited. My sister played her drum (like she does every morning) and my little brother was shouting, “Cornflake! Cornflake!” When we got to the zoo there were zebras and spotty leopard and lions and every animal you could think of, and as soon as I saw the otters I happily danced over there and stared at them thinking, “cute!” It was all so exciting, and I had an amazing day, and that's why I am writing this, because I am going back there today and I am very excited. 

Rose - 100WC#30

Yesterday I went to the zoo at 1:00 pm. I was in the car for ages. Luckily my mum packed some crisps and lemonade. I ate loads. After I had eaten everything my sister Megan started moaning at me because I had eaten most of her things. When we got there, we went to see a zebra. It was so funny because it had a drum and did this really weird face. Next we went to see a lion. It was sitting in the corner of its enclosure eating cornflakes. When it saw us coming it got up and danced like a superstar. I thought it was actually amazing. Yesterday was really exciting.

Olivia - 100WC#30

One day I woke up and I went down stairs, I got a CORNFLAKE and while I was eating my cornflakes I DANCED around like something was really EXCITING but actually I was listening to music and the song was called LION and it has this really loud DRUM beat in the song and that really annoyed because it hurt my ears. So I got up to turn it off but when I was trying to turn it off I accidentally hit the loud button so it was really loud, then I tried to turn down but when I was trying to turn it down it turned up even louder so I chucked it on the floor and it broke and smashed then I just went to go back to bed.

Sophia - 100WC#30


“Harry I know you are excited but keep the noise down with your drum set please!” politely asked Harry’s Mother.
Suddenly, the noise fell silent, all that Harry’s Mother heard was Harry’s sister’s lion game. The next morning Harry took the cornflake box from the shelf, when from the corner of Harry’s eye he noticed the drumming competition. Before thinking, Harry begged his Mother to enter. She refused to let Harry for the next few hours until she got annoyed. His Mother agreed, Harry was over the moon with delight, thrilled he danced on the table.

(he lost the competition)

Jemima - 100WC#30

I went to the circus with my dad yesterday, it was amazing. There were, lions, tigers, dogs and even crocodiles! I think it was cruel to keep animals like that, but it was a great show. My dad bought me some candy floss and my hands and face got really sticky. Anyway, there was a lion that danced, a dog that did tricks with a cornflake, and there was a big group of crocodiles, and they each had a drum that they banged on with their great big noses. It was so exciting. I had a great time watching those animals.

Eleanor - 100WC#30

One day a little girl ran to the shop with her mum and dad. She was so looking forward to getting a toy lion because everyone wants it. The little girl danced round the shop and when she got the lion she named it cornflake. I never knew that the lion looked so exciting to play with because he has a really big smile on his face. When I got home I heard the noise of a drum I wondered where it was coming from. I looked in my room and I saw the real lion toy playing the drums.

Sam F -100WC#30

One day it was my birthday and I invited my family to come to my house. When they arrived someone gave me a massive present. As soon as they gave me the present it was exciting to see what I received. I opened it and it was a drum kit. When I was playing with the drums the lights turned off. Suddenly my mum was carrying a lion themed cake and was singing happy birthday to me. Before I was about to eat the lion cake my dad said, "There are cornflake cakes in the kitchen." At the end of the party everyone danced.

Morgan - 100WC#30

This morning I was eating my cornflakes I was just about to eat my last cornflake that's when I heard a drum roll I was confused. Then came a lion who danced round my kitchen doing the tango! I don't know what was happening but it was exciting so I carried on watching the lion dance and the drum noises. I was just about to eat my last cornflake but then a bullet came shooting through my window! I screamed in fear then came another and another and another was I going to live or will I die? "We got her boss just like you said," the lion announced, "perfect!"

Sam B - 100WC#30

Dad walked into the room. He saw his kids watching an adverts on TV. A drum roll sound came from the TV. BING!
"Co-co pops cornflakes are delicious and crunchy," said a voice on the TV. A crocodile on the TV sped over to a bowl of cornflakes. Suddenly, he fell in a hole that was covered in leaves. The screen switched to a monkey, a hippo, a giraffe and a lion. They all danced with their cornflakes. The advert went off and another one came on. Dad left the room. 
"Weird and exciting adverts," murmured Dad.

Chloe - X marks the spot

“Monkey! Come here!” called Lion worried about his beloved friend. Where could he be Lion wondered as he stepped a little closer to the dreaded dangerous Exciting Forest every second. The closer he got the more worried he felt for Monkey. He just wanted to make up with monkey but obviously he couldn't do that until he found him. But what was that lying on the floor? Monkey’s toy!!!! He must have dropped it thought Lion. On the toy was a map that had directions on it… X marks the spot, that’s where Monkey is!