I'm going to tell you about my friend Izzy, she was blind but when she got help she could see! This is my story my friend Izzy who I know is blind but her blindness is getting worse. So her mum took her to the doctors or somewhere and they helped her but it cost a lot of money. Izzy's mum was £8 short I told her she can have my money. I did it because I wanted to help my friend! It took 20 minutes but it was worth it and Izzy said, "Suddenly I was able to see again!"
That was the story about Izzy
What a wonderful thing to spend £8 on! I'd love to know more about how Izzy and you felt about her gift of sight. Be careful about repeating words and sentences eg this being a story about Izzy which you write three times. You could have used those words to say more about your friend - maybe how you helped her get about when she was still blind.
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