As I looked around there was a crowd of people looking at me like I had just won the lottery, but I haven't won anything. They were looking at me because I had a monkey on my shoulder. I had been to the zoo and I thought my little girl would like a monkey as a pet. I now have to think of a name; Princess, Buttercup, Holly and Daisy. Which one shall I pick. After a while I thought Buttercup was the one so I took her home to my daughter.
Slightly wierd twist in it I didn't quite get the story in place but it is good.
ReplyDeleteSam B
Slightly wierd I didn't fit the story in place properly in my mind.
ReplyDeleteI like your work but you could have done more description on the monkey.
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ReplyDeleteI like yours because it is very funny and I am looking forward to your next 100wc. By Maddie
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