One very strange day there was a terrible sound that was never heard before. This sound wasn’t just any old sound it was the strangest sound ever before. Everybody was searching for the most mysterious sound but it was nowhere to be found. The sound went on for hours and people were also searching everywhere. Could it be a tornado, people thought?
It was a quite frightening sound which wasn’t popular because no one has heard it before. All of a sudden the noise had stopped everyone started to calm down. The weird thing was no one knew what the sound was………
How mysterious Amy! You definitely keep your reader interested and I like how you used the prompt, the idea was a good one. Maybe next time you could add some more details about the sound... Keep up the writing!
ReplyDeleteLaura A, Team100, Luxembourg