Oooo!!! And the noise stopped.
“What is that noise?” the girl asked.
“That is the noise of the spirits that are trapped here,”
said Angelica in a stern voice.
“But...”
“But what?”
“Well I thought when someone died they went to heaven or …below.”
“Well you thought wrong.”
“Please tell me about it, I’m eager to know.”
“Fine it only happens if you can’t find a light, so
basically if you can, you do go to heaven...”
“Going off that subject, where next?” said the girl
excitedly.
“Well next we go to the basement...”
“Why the basement? Not the basement, please.”
Olivia,
ReplyDeleteReally nice dialogue here, and I love how you incorporated the noise into your story. Lovely work.
Laura A, Team100, Luxembourg