At
my school, we were doing a race between the fastest year six 80m sprinters. I
thought my friend would win but I entered anyway. There were about 10 fast
racers all lined up waiting to go, each one was very eager to win. The race was about to start; on you marks,
get set, go! It ended up with me winning and my friend, who I thought was going
to win, coming second. I looked around and noticed a film crew at the race, I
was amazed ...we seemed to be on the television... wow! We might be famous.
Hi Oliver,
ReplyDeleteGreat concept of using a school race for your story. You incorporated the prompt seamlessly and your story flows well. I love that you also won the race in your story, despite not expecting to do so.
Well done!
Michelle
Melbourne, Australia