Saturday, 17 March 2018

The Giant Teacup by Jakub

Time and time before, a giant used to have a tea party alone.  

Before humans found this place, it was calm and peaceful until... people made loud noises and that disturbed the giant. He didn't like it so when they were sleeping he would destroy some buildings every night, until there were no more buildings left. Then he could have all the picnics he wanted.  

The people went to him and asked him why he was destroying their buildings but he did not want to talk about it. So, they got all the help possible and pushed him in to a river and he died.  

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jakub,

    I think I feel quite sorry for your giant: he was living peacefully, having picnics until the humans disturbed him! And then he died! I wonder if this is how animals feel when we cut down woods? Your story is well written and you have used some descriptive words. Maybe next time, you could try varying the way that you start your sentences a little more (maybe start with -ing/-ed.)

    Keep up the good work,
    Yanalie (Team 100)