I was in my room listening to my rock metal music on my MP3 player, when my little sister Steph came in and said to me in a gentle voice “Do you want some banana custard, me and mum made it.” Then I said to her “Okay.”
So I went down stairs to have a taste of the custard that mum and Stephaney had made. Soon after that, after I had tasted the custard I said to Stephaney, “The custard tastes like banana!”
Then Mum and Steph tried it, and they thought it tasted like banana too. We all loved the delicious banana custard.
Well done Neizan, your 100wc had great use of speech. You tried hard to include interesting details. Keep it up :-)
ReplyDeleteYum! Banana custard! Your use of dialog really made me feel like I was there in the story.
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