“It’s time to go,” shouted dad from the driveway. We were going to our nanna's to look after her cat while she was in hospital. I couldn't wait, as we were going to the fantastic swimming pool near their bungalow which had a bright green slide. ”I am coming dad.”
"Oh no!” I thought, we had to go in granddad's old dilapidated car, as dad's car was at the garage. Suddenly I saw some smoke above the car, "Dad there is smoke!” I shouted. Dad lifted the bonnet, it looks like the car had broken down. At least we wouldn't have to go in that horrible car.
This is brilliant, Caitlin. You have managed to spin the words into a real story and added some great words of your own (dilapidated was a great adjective). Not many people know how to spell 'granddad' correctly either...
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