As it shivered, they all confusingly glared at the gruesome creature. It's red breath taking eyes were torturous to the unlucky people that dared to look at them. The creature's skin was crowded with long horrific bronze hair, it had red disgusting spots all over its face, almost like a monster's chickenpox and six claws on each of its hands and feet. No one knew what the creature was, it was like nothing they had seen before and then the realisation hit them, this creature was not from our world but from another planet, who knows where!
Sophia,
ReplyDeleteThis was CREEPY! I absolutely loved all of the descriptive words that you used because they created a great mental image for me as the reader. Next time be sure to look up the spelling of any words for which you are not sure. Keep up the EXCELLENT work!