Today I have to go to my gran’s. She has lots of antiques. Luckily I have a sister she has to come too. I love one it is so cute it has a green cat swimming on it.
One day I invited my friends round for a party. “WWWWWOOOOOOO!!!” Screamed my friends. Then I heard a SMASH!
In the morning I saw the green cat that swims broken on the floor. “NO!” I lifted up the pieces and hid them. I never saw them again. The next day my mum and dad picked me up. I went home and forgot.
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