I was sat in my
favourite chair reading a book about wild animals when all of a sudden I heard
a loud terrifying shrieking scream coming from the television, I looked up from
my book immediately to see on the TV screen a woman dressed in a pretty yellow and white polka
dot dress running away
in a panic from a large fierce gorilla
who was knocking down a wall with bricks flying everywhere.
As I watched I
shouted, “I’m reading a book on wild animals and this happens, they really
should be kept in the wild.”
What a coincidence with you reading a book about wild animals and a wild animal comes on screen, Faith! I liked the way you used all those words to explain the scream. It showed how engrossed you were in the book that you needed such a loud unusual sound. I enjoyed your writing.
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