Friday 16 November 2018

Madi - Bricks Gorilla Yellow Running Pretty,


Yellow bricks crashed to the ground as a dark coloured, angry gorilla slammed into the old lady's house ferociously, tearing it to nothing more than a pile of trash! The terrified woman ran for her life as she was so scared because she was just relaxing and the colossal attack terrified her. She didn’t know what to do as she didn’t have a house anymore. It was very pretty too! She was incredibly quick even though she was 93. Running like lightning, she turned around and the huge, black gorilla was just seconds behind her. What a poor old lady...

1 comment:

  1. Hi Madi,
    Great story! You used lots of adjectives and adverbs "ferociously" and "colossal". Well done for using the simile "running like lightning". I hope she escaped unharmed. Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Coventry, UK

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