Friday 26 September 2014

100WC#04 by Kieran

Once there was a family who were very silly but there was one family member called Freddie Forget, who forgot everything. One day his mum sent him out to a shopping centre to get a pepper, an orange and because his parents were very silly he had to get a crocodile for his dad. He got everything he needed so he went to the checkout but a long haired man pushed past him his hair was so soft he was amazed,  no astonished, no amazed (because he forgets a lot he couldn't remember it.) The employee came to him, eventually he mumbled, "Are you being served?"

2 comments:

  1. Laurie (Team 100WC)28 September 2014 at 15:52

    This is a very silly 100 word challenge, Kieran! I really like how you used alliteration in his name by calling him Freddie Forget. I look forward to seeing what you write next!

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  2. I like this story a lot! It's funny and imaginative :-)

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