Once there was a family who were very silly but there was
one family member called Freddie Forget, who forgot everything. One day his mum
sent him out to a shopping centre to get a pepper, an orange and because his
parents were very silly he had to get a crocodile for his dad. He got
everything he needed so he went to the checkout but a long haired man pushed
past him his hair was so soft he was amazed, no astonished, no amazed (because he forgets a
lot he couldn't remember it.) The employee came to him, eventually he mumbled,
"Are you being served?"
This is a very silly 100 word challenge, Kieran! I really like how you used alliteration in his name by calling him Freddie Forget. I look forward to seeing what you write next!
ReplyDeleteI like this story a lot! It's funny and imaginative :-)
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