Saturday 20 September 2014

The Bridge by Jessica


The villagers had been arguing for the last ten months, so one side decided to get some builders in to knock down the bridge which joined the two villages together. As they were knocking the bridge down, it fell into the clean, shiny, blue lake and all of the lumpy bricks were never to be seen again. The villagers were separated once and for all. One day a villager went diving and found the broken down bridge but he saw a gold shiny thing so he went a bit deeper. The man saw a treasure chest he used the money to buy a new bridge.

2 comments:

  1. This is an imaginative response to this week's prompt with an almost fairy-tale ending. I wonder what the villagers were arguing about? It must have been very serious to try to separate their villages forever! Maybe you could write this as a longer story another time with more of your ideas.
    Nicola Richardson, team 100wc, Tyne and Wear, UK

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  2. I think that you did really well
    Eleanor

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