Dear Mum,
I am on the short bridge in France while writing this, it's
such a scenic view. Tomorrow I am going to the Eiffel Tower to look over the
whole of Paris I'm so excited. The only problem about being in France is I miss
you so much but I try and keep thinking about something else. I hope you’re
having a nice time in England, It's a bit weird being in France because I have
to speak French all the time, but after four days I've got used to it. See you
soon my lovely mother.
Sam, I like the format you used! You've made your entry have a very personal feel. I like the way you've described looking over 'the whole of Paris'. Be careful to take a look through your work for run-on sentences.
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