Once there was a girl called Rosalie. She went to a zoo and
saw all sorts of different animals but her favourite was the crocodile but she
also liked the giraffe because it has a long neck that can reach up high. Half
way through the day she decided to have her dinner she had a soft roll which
had chicken and pepper in it. She also had a piece of fruit which was an orange
but she realised she had forgot her drink so she brought one from the zoo. After
her dinner she went around the rest of the zoo.
Hi Madison - well done for incorporating all 5 words! I enjoyed reading your work. Next time you finish a pice of writing, read it through and really check your punctuation. There are a few places when a comma or even a semi colon would have been appropriate. Good luck with the next challenge!
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