When I got home I forgot about my dogs because they were all
asleep and they normally bark when they hear the door open. But when I went to
see them there was a crocodile in there instead.
My mum wasn't home so I thought
she was taking the dogs for a walk to the shop to get an orange and some
pepper.
After I had dinner I saw a massive hill of feathers me and my brothers
were jumping on them and then I fell but my landing was so soft. When my mum
got back she made a cake.
Well done Annabelle I like your challenge and you have used all the words. It flows well and you have used super descriptive words. I hope you enjoyed the cake.
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