One lonely day in southern England there was a terrorising storm. The waves were terrifying. The violent storm was cold approaching; people were running away from the dark gloomy sea. The people were petrified you could tell by the look on their faces.
Later on that day an alarming bit of thunder struck and faces went blank with fear, suddenly thunder struck again and everybody ran away from the island apart from one boy Tom Robinson. His best friends were jealous of his bravery but did they have the guts to stand up to the storm? No they did not!
Good use of a question towards the end and I liked your use of words like petrifying and terrorising!
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