Wednesday 30 October 2013
Tarne 100 Word Challenge #9
The violent storm was terrible there were trees blowing over onto houses and cars with people in them. Also it was like Dorothy in the Wizard of Oz with the big hurricane but this one had rain pouring down onto the bumpy, soggy road. The rain got heavier and heavier, the sky got darker and darker until it went black! Lights turned on in houses as all the cars, and even lorries got blown away. The storm got more furious as people spoke about it. The lonely town was trashed. The rain turned into a downpour. And everyone was unhappy.
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I like the reference to the Wizard of Oz!
ReplyDeleteI like the way your writing seems to pick up pace (use of shorter sentences) as the storm worsens.
Hi Tarne - you've written really good description of the storm here. I like how you've included some personification (the storm getting furious) , and making a reference to the Wizard of Oz was very clever too. Well done!
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tarne this work is realy good i espeicaly like how you have compared it to the wizard of oz and how all the lights came on
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