Wednesday 30 October 2013

Tilly S 100 Word Challenge #9

The violent storm was knocking down trees and ripping up fences, and my brother was in the house, standing next to our mother, all shaking and teeth chattering. The storm was so strong that it shattered the fragile glass windows on our shed, and when that happened dad locked himself in the bedroom with mum and they started yelling and raging about how much money it would take to get the windows fixed, so it was just me and him, in the dark gloomy kitchen. “At least it is still a bit light.” Just then all the lights switched off.

3 comments:

  1. Some good descriptions and an exciting cliff hanger ending - well done!

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  2. Hello Tilly,
    I wonder how much of your writing was true? We had a similar experience in our house with smashed fence panels and a wrecked greenhouse. Luckily, we didn't lose our electricity supply! I liked your ending. It was good how you tried to end on an optimistic note, looking on the bright side. But then, the lights went out too!
    Well done and thank you for sharing your writing!
    Mrs Rowland (Team 100wc)

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  3. Hello Tilly,
    I wonder how much of your writing was true? We had a similar experience in our house with smashed fence panels and a wrecked greenhouse. Luckily, we didn't lose our electricity supply! I liked your ending. It was good how you tried to end on an optimistic note, looking on the bright side. But then, the lights went out too!
    Well done and thank you for sharing your writing!
    Mrs Rowland (Team 100wc)

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