Wednesday 30 October 2013

Lettia 100 Word Challenge #9

I woke up this morning to the sound of banging and clattering. I was shocked to find that a storm had hit my home town and more importantly my house!!! Sprinting quickly out of my bed, I grabbed my coat and dashed downstairs, and that’s where I found my mum waiting for me outside. She was watching the rain bucketing down and then sadly she called “Our house is no longer suitable for us to live in, so that’s why we’re going to stay with our uncle and aunt.” Gradually she held her hand out for me and we left.

2 comments:

  1. Well thought out with some excellent descriptions. I really like the use of gradually to start your fial sentence!

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  2. You have used really good description ,from Amy

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