I had been preparing for a big sleepover party for weeks!!!!
It was finally the day, the hour, the minute, the second.....
"Hi, so glad you are all here - head upstairs, the first room on the right. I'll get some snacks..." And when I opened the cupboard door nothing was in there.
"Hey guys get down here now it's going to be a detective mystery. There is a whole cupboard of marshmallows and delicious sweets missing. There is a trail and we need to find the thief!"
"Hey look, some marshmallows this way!" Exclaimed Ella.
The marshmallows lead in to my brothers bedroom, how didn't I know?
What a great story, Leah! You have created a feeling of excitement about the sleepover...and of disappointment when you find the cupboard empty. Well done! Great punctuation too! Keep writing!
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