Friday 23 May 2014

Why Lucy needs to go to school by Emily

Dear World Leaders, 
My opinion is Lucy should go to school, she would have amazing life to live, though some children do not like school, she would be grateful to set foot in a school.

Why is she not allowed to set foot in an amazing world of education, one that she would love to bits? What is the difference between me Emily and her Lucy we are both humans, so what if we live in different countries we should all be allowed school and massive opportunities.

Yours sincerely Emily C

1 comment:

  1. Emily, you seem passionate about Lucy going to school but the MPs need to know that there are 57 million children who are unable to go to school, and many of those are disabled. In a persuasive text, it is good to support an opinion with facts and figures. The use of a question is a clever way to get the reader to think about the topic. Well done!

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