Saturday 13 October 2018

…it reminded me of a time when…by Julia

Whilst the silver moon rose into the inky black sky, clouds disappeared every second you looked at them. The navy-blue water darkened each and every time the moon went up to the glistening stars. The abandoned hotel stood still, gazing at the long-gone clouds. On the hotel walls, there were old photos. It reminded me of a time when my family came here.

At the top of the hotel, were frozen figures with crimson red sharp teeth, reaching out for a victim. At midnight, monstrous creatures came and celebrated. No one knew what they celebrated. It was like a secret just for them. Some people tried to find out, but no one came back alive...

1 comment:

  1. Hi Julia,
    Amazing story - certainly my favourite one this week! You used a wide variety of interesting adjectives like "inky" and "crimson" which paint a vivid picture in the reader's mind. Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Coventry, UK

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