Saturday, 21 March 2015

Kieran …as they turned the corner… 100WC#26

Poke-venture: Dialga and Palkia's awakening ceremony.
Me and my friend Aron had just got to Mount Cornet where spear pillar is. Team Galactic are trying to control the legendary pokemon Dialga and Palkia. Cyrus (their leader) had just summoned the legendary pokemon. Some of Team Galactic grunt, as they turned round the corner saw me and Aron. "Infernape I chose you!" I shouted.
"Go Eevee!" shouted Aron.
"Okay Infernape use Flamethrower!" I demanded.
"Eevee, shadow ball!" Aron shouted.
"Retreat, quick!" commanded Cyrus. Diaga and Palkia shot a Roar of time and space. Me and Aron ran but we came back.

1 comment:

  1. Hi there Kieran
    This is a very different 100 word challenge to the ones I've been reading and I loved reading it. It sounds like the script for a very exciting video game and I think you could have a great future ahead scripting video games. I especially like the wide variety of verbs that you used such as demanded, summoned and commanded. Great work and I hope you keep writing for the 100 word challenge. Well done.
    Ms O'Keeffe (team 100wc)