I was excited for my holiday to Hawaii. I was stressed from
work in the dusty factory. We were nearly there. Then when I looked out the
plane window, I could see a tropical island covered with a line of soft sand.
The gigantic plane landed on a small deck on the edge of the island. Hawaii was
just a tiny step away. Everyone speedily rushed out into the dry beach. I felt
the heat run through my body. I followed the line of happy people to a white
hotel. I quickly got inside and went to my hotel room.
This is an excellent story and it has a good use of description and vocabulary.
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Sophia
I like it a lot. Its got a lot of good description.
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